The feedback from my last pitch was encouraging saying that I improved, which was nice to hear and encouraged me to continue to improve. The only other feedback was not to introduce myself so I just took that out.
The only feedback I got said I did improve from last time and that I introduced myself and I shouldn't introduce myself at the beginning. To improve I didn't introduce myself and practiced more for this one.
I think it was smart not to introduce yourself since an elevator pitch is just a way to reel potential investors in. So it is good to cut out extra information separate from the product. I liked how you dressed professionally, and I think you had a solid hook and structure to your pitch, which helped when following along.
I really liked this pitch. I noticed you didn’t introduce yourself and started with a hook many people can relate to. I think that being relatable will grab peoples attention and make your product/ service more attractive. I really liked how you described some of the alternatives to paper straws such as papaya straws. I your voice was well projected and you dressed the part! Great job.
Dear Matthew,
ReplyDeleteI think it was smart not to introduce yourself since an elevator pitch is just a way to reel potential investors in. So it is good to cut out extra information separate from the product. I liked how you dressed professionally, and I think you had a solid hook and structure to your pitch, which helped when following along.
Hey Matthew!
ReplyDeleteI really liked this pitch. I noticed you didn’t introduce yourself and started with a hook many people can relate to. I think that being relatable will grab peoples attention and make your product/ service more attractive. I really liked how you described some of the alternatives to paper straws such as papaya straws. I your voice was well projected and you dressed the part! Great job.
-Jenna