17A Elevator Pitch No. 2


  1. https://youtu.be/mangJLzJtRQ
  2. I only had one comment on my last elevator pitch, but I was surprised to see that it was very positive and that they enjoyed it. I thought my first one was not that good, so it was nice to see the support.
  3. I tried to be more confident and dynamic and avoid stumbling on the new pitch. The feedback helped to push me to try to do better and not say um so much. 

Comments

  1. Riley Bakos BlogMarch 23, 2020 at 9:45 AM

    Dear Matthew,

    I really was an improvement from your first pitch in this one. You definitely dressed very professionally and were able to communicate your vision thoroughly. You accomplished this through the structure of your tone and how you used your voice to communicate your ideas. I definitely think you succeeded in being more confident and did not say um as much.

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  2. Jenna PatonMarch 23, 2020 at 11:45 AM

    Hey Matthew! I think that this pitch was much better than your last pitch. Although, your last pitch was not bad. I did notice that you introduce yourself which Pryor did warn us not to do. I don’t think that is a huge deal. I liked how your projected your voice and seemed confident. You looked very professional as well. Great job!

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